[OS] Black ( en anglais )

Dernière édition par Mannee le Ven 7 Nov 2008 - 20:52, édité 1 fois

Type : OS.
Personnages : Bill & Tom
Résumé : Bill force Tom a sortir un soir, car celui-ci s'enferme, puis.. un accident. Tom à l'hôpital.
Warning : aucun.
Spécialité : OS en anglais.

Please, sit here for a while. You’re not guilty; innocence is in your
veins. So you just wonder, why him? And now why you?
Remember what she said:
«Honey, life is a game, learn to respect the rules, and enjoy
yourself, life is a fucking game. »
Do you realize that you’re the next in line?
The messiah is dead now; a messenger came to told me the death news.
Mum was completely right, I’ve played with fire, and I’m burning now.
And you, messenger of my death, sitting here, just watch me burn.
Time is over, it’s all over.
I’m waiting for death, oh yes honey, come, and take me, take me in
your black arms.
Do you sometimes want to say to the whole world:
that you’re alright, the sunshine is rising?
You fell in love with a memory, you’re alright, and you love her ?
No, you can’t, you just CAN’T.
« Hide her »
« Bill, we don’t want to see your shit »
Shit? Shit, what shit? she isn’t.
this fucking shit, is just my only way to disappear of this dark
world, you fuckers, don’t you realize that because of you, I’m the
next in line ?
You’ve had him, and soon, it’ll be me. As it could be you. As it could
be her. It’ll be me, and only me.
The victim of the music’s world.
I had him, and now I have nothing.
I close my eyes, the dark.
I had him, and now I have nothing.
He disappeared, and now all that swims in my veins are just fucking
substances.

No I’m not the king, no you’re not the queen, she’s just the former of
my life.
This dark voice screams in my head, she pushes me to do it.
At the end of OUR story, I just want to thank my only heroine.

“Tom?
- In my bedroom.
The man came into the room, looked around for a while and laughed.
- Again in the black brother?
- I like the black Bill.
- I see that, hum; you want to do something tonight? You need to move.

Sure, he didn't feel like it, but he had to leave with his brother,
tonight he was right, he had to move a little, because staying here,
in this black room, wouldn’t be good for their relationship. At all.

-if you want me to do it my dear brother, I’m here. Don’t forget to
hide.
-You too. I don’t want you to die, because of a storm of fans tonight.

Tom, laughed as they were already in a pub.

Like the moon needs attention Tom needs Bill.
Like the earth needs the sun, Bill needs Tom.
Bill is the one for Tom.
Tom is the One for Bill.

But tonight, nothing’ll be right.

In the Hospital.

Bill is sitting on a chair next to Tom’s bed, he cries, he dies.

“I ever thought that I’ll die in the dark. Because, I like the dark. But now back is black. And I just have my eyes to cry. Why did I ask you to move ? why ? if I didn’t do it, you would be smiling behind your guitar, and not closing your eyes in this fucking white bed.”

A nurse come, she sees Bill crying, and she wants to go back, but he says her that she can stay here.
They speak.

“ you know, you’re not guilty, at all, you couldn’t expect to what happened Bill… you couldn’t.
- MAYBE, but he’s my brother and I had to envisage everything that concern him. I HAVE and I will.

The nurse gets out, and let him alone with his brother.

Will he survive? Tom hopes that his brother will hang up to his memories.
Tom’s memories.

Même si c'est anglais, que j'ai buter sur quelques mots ...
Je trouve tes phrases magnifiques .
Surtout le passage que je t'ai montré ...

Tu es très bonne ecrivaine .
J'ecrirais plus une autre fois, je dois m'en aller .

Je suis une grande fanatique de Ton ecriture .
Et a chaque fois, je frissonne ...

Merci. encore une fois

des avis ?

Malgrès mon faible niveau d'anglais, j'ai reussis à comprendre et je trouve sa vraiment magnifique, surtout la façon dont tu écris . .
Merci pour ce bel OS =D

j'aime..
l'anglais ça donne de l'originalité
tes mots..<3..super

vraiment un magnifique OS

merci beaucoup les gens :')

si tu refais un OS ou même une fic, tu m'envoie un MP Wink

pas de soucis ;')
je viens de terminer ma fiction si ça intéresse.

d'autres avis ?

J'aime beaucoup, mais j'aimerais avoir la traduction en français, en spoiler, ou mp, comme tu préfères, pour avoir une meilleure compréhension.
(Même si je pense avoir tout compris)
Mais sinon, j'adore <3

En français :

Spoiler:

=)

Y'a énormement de fautes d'anglais,mais l'idée générale est pas mauvaise.

ok. merci pour les fautes.

j'aime beaucoup...

merci

Wow. Magnifique. J'trouve même pas les mots. Vraiment. Continue <3

Mannee a écrit:: pas de soucis ;')
je viens de terminer ma fiction si ça intéresse.

oui je veux bien
enfin je la lirai pas tt de suite, parce que pendant les vaances, je vais pas beaucoup sur internet mais j'la lirai en septembre =)

je t'envoie un lien par MP. Wink

choco__x3'_ : merci.

ok merci

Hum ... Génial =]

merci.

avis ? :')

Géniaaal

En plus, les influences EMPYRiennes, c'est vraiment pas pour me déplaire <3

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